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A good attempt. Crease of background is competing with Baitale ! In such attempts 1. keep background at distance so that it becomes automatically out of focus. 2. Whenyou take / make such pictures open the aperture, keeping the depth of field in mind – it is enough if from tip of nose to ear. Now the picture becomes 3D. Tilt of the model should never be 900 but it is 450 . In your picture the shoulder ( Heavy High light ) is marring the very purpose of photographing – Smile & mood. Better try again if model is available at your wish.
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ಹಿರಿಯರಾದ ಶ್ರೀ. ಎಮ್.ಎಸ್.ಹೆಬ್ಬಾರ್" ರವರು ಈ ಛಾಯಾಚಿತ್ರದ ಬಗೆಗೆ ತಮ್ಮ ಅಭಿಪ್ರಾಯ ಹೀಗೆ ತಿಳಿಸಿದ್ದಾರೆ...
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ನಿನ್ನ ನಗುವಿನ ಚಿತ್ತಾರ
A good attempt. Crease of background is competing with Baitale ! In such attempts 1. keep background at distance so that it becomes automatically out of focus. 2. Whenyou take / make such pictures open the aperture, keeping the depth of field in mind – it is enough if from tip of nose to ear. Now the picture becomes 3D. Tilt of the model should never be 900 but it is 450 . In your picture the shoulder ( Heavy High light ) is marring the very purpose of photographing – Smile & mood. Better try again if model is available at your wish.
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